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Ah, the Writing Life. At least I’m not dependent on book sales to stay alive; I’d be sleeping in a car and eating out of dumpsters.

MEDUSA is moving along at a crawl, but she’s moving. So many things have interrupted my “Flow”(sarcasm alert) of late, that I have been in the ‘one sentence here, a paragraph there’ mode for a couple weeks. BUT keep that up for a while and in the end you have something.

And since the book itself is done, so to speak, and I’m writing an interweave chapter to tie up some loose ends, I guess I’m not actually in a big hurry. At this point I want it to be good, and I want it to be ready by Orycon, and there is no good reason that I can’t just mosey the thing along and make it happen. It’s a very different feeling from the run-up to publication of SALTARAE.

I will be at Sam Bond’s Garage tonight, and as usual I will have my bad attitude, snarky sense of humor, and copies of all my writings.

To the NSA: Nothing new this week, so you can concentrate on militias and such. Edward Snowden, the drinks are on me if you can make the scene.
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I am working (once again) on “MEDUSA: a Tale Of Vengeance”.

Possibly, I should have taken a longer break after the nightmare of format-foo that SALTARAE turned into at the end. But, I found myself with the energy so I re-wrote parts of the Prologue, and a bit near the end…and wrote the actual ending of the story, to my satisfaction.

Okay, some background: I started this book shortly after publishing my first novel (LEONTARI: a Polemic Romance) in early August of 2010. I thought it was Book Two of my Alternate History series set in the 13th Century of the Christian Hypothesis.

AS it turned out, I was wrong. One of the major characters in MEDUSA is a 15-year-old named Selos, son of Xenos and Marisi. About halfway through the book I began to wonder: “Given that he survived the sack of his hometown when he was eight and he’s the son of two high-achievers, and that ‘kids’ in the Commonwealth are way mature by our standards due to their superior upbringing…even given all of that, this guy is a badass. How’d he get that way?”

One day I wrote an outline. Then I was working on “VIASMAE: an Intrigue” which is ACTUALLY Book Two in that series. For a while I worked on both books, but that got harder and harder to do, and I put MEDUSA ‘on the back burner and finished VIASMAE. That book I published in early 2013, final edition in May of that year. Whew.

I went back to work on MEDUSA, and by January of 2014 I was feeling pretty good about it: maybe 90% finished.

HOWever: Shortly after the second book went live, Chris Watts asked an innocent question: “What would people from that Timeline be like in a time parallel to ours?” It implied a question about what would such a culture be like after 800+ years without Church or State. How much faster would they have advanced technologically? (A lot faster, as it turned out.)

So thoughts about that were swirling around in my brain when Erika Milo said something about how hard it would be to write a description of the Oregon Country Fair, especially at night, that wouldn’t seem utterly unbelievable. Then I remembered talking to Marleda Jones about how if aliens or time travelers *were* using the Fair as a crossing point, no one would ever notice. Which meant that all that mixed together in the salad spinner of my mind, and out popped the idea for SALTARAE: an Adventure Across Timelines.

It turned out that I had to write that (and serialize it) and then publish it, before I could finish MEDUSA.

NOW, however, I AM gonna finish it, and before I write even ONE WORD of the Sequel to SALTARAE!

So there.

Now I’m gonna post this, and then go to Sam Bond’s Garage for some booze. I hope to see you all there: every damn one of you!

Gotta go. See ya!

SALTARAE

Jul. 8th, 2014 06:23 am
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Last night at about nine Lulu (my POD publisher) emailed me to say that my order has shipped...! By 5:30 PM tomorrow I will have the first 25 copies of the first salable edition of _SALTARAE: an Adventure Across Timelines_ in my hands. (There are still a few typos in this edition.) Nevertheless, I *will* have stock in hand for the Country Fair. That is either crucial (I hope to sell some to Fair Family, since the story begins with a trip to the Fair (in an Alternate History)) or meaningless (I might sell no books at all; that has happened in the past). At any rate, *very Little* work is left to be done before I publish the Second and Final Edition.
Then, after a _short_ break, I will be back to work finishing _MEDUSA_. I feel justified in hoping that there will be WAY less format-foo when that gets uploaded.
For those of you not attending the Fair who may want to *buy* this novel, I will reserve copies for anyone who messages me or comments below. Either from the coming batch, or the next order, depending on how many I sell at the Fair. Woo hoo!
Gotta go. See ya!
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What if the biggest debate in global society was between Egalitarians and Meritocrats?

Instead of what we have: long and winding non-sequiturs and ad hominem attacks from various factions of the ruling class and their paid (and unpaid) dupes. Attacks upon each other—but also, very vicious attacks upon those who try to pull the curtain aside and reveal the little men who pull the levers.

If we could shake off the baleful influence of Church and State, take control of the media, and speak directly to one another, could we settle on a balance between the birthright of every human being and the rewards due to those who do more? Or might we reach an 'unsettled balance', such that variations in time and place might occur, but the principle was clear and strong?

I think that we could do this, that we *can* do it. Will we? Or are we extinct, and don't know it yet? This is what I write about, (mostly) in fiction.

(Arrenji sits in the back of my mind, laughing. She shakes her head. Her dreadlocks, fine as worsted yarn, slide across her shoulders. "Get it together, people, or it will be too late. All too soon, it will be too late...")

The Situationists began (about 1954) with conversations in cafes and pubs. In 1968 they nearly (so nearly!) *changed the world*.

I'll be at Sam Bond's Garage tonight. 6-ish.

Gotta go. See ya!
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Oddly, no matter what period of history I happen to dig into, the new discoveries I make never turn me back in the direction of consensus reality. Shit just gets weirder and weirder.
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The final chapters: (18 19 20) of
SALTARAE: an Adventure Across Timelines
Are now in the hands of the beta reader.
That is all. See ya!
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Yesterday it was raining hard and my back was hurting, so I stayed home and wrote. I can’t do that again…I swear, at noon I’m gonna go out and mow some lawns and try to get some money.

The good part about staying home yesterday? The last three chapters (18,19,20) of SALTARAE are now first-drafted. Less philosophical and more action-oriented than earlier parts of the book, but that’s okay. Weird aliens, amnesiac cops, odd, nutty old ladies, and a bizarre anti-climax…but hey, if you wanted sanity and orderliness, you’d write your own book.

I’ll need to let it sit for a day or two, then do some intensive re-reading and editing. There’s room in each chapter for explanation, description, some more dialog (internal or otherwise) to help things hang together.

As for the continuation of the story, well that depends on the reaction to the end of this one. Mr. Rothakis has yet to hit a challenge that he can’t overcome, or a test he fails to pass. His evolution into a more badass version of himself has proceeded mostly smoothly…but he has a past that may yet creep up on him, and a nearly impossible assignment from his ‘handlers’ in the Sacred Band. Sooner or later that excrement may hit the air conditioning unit. Who knows? Who cares? Find out next week, same time, same station…

Gotta go. See ya.
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In the last few days, since Thursday I think, I wrote something like 16,000 words. Chapter Twelve is in the hands of the beta reader, Thirteen and Fourteen are each above 6,000 words, and best of all, I've outlined the book through Chapter Twenty and the end of the first story arc. I may reasonably hope to be ready to post the last nine chapters more or less on schedule. I may reasonably hope to be able to turn my attention back to MEDUSA: A Tale of Vengeance, perhaps by new year's day or shortly after. I might possibly have two volumes of SALTARAE: an Adventure Across Timelines ready to publish by the Country Fair, one volume for certain.

Woohoo.

Gotta go.

See ya.

MAYBE...

Nov. 7th, 2013 09:10 pm
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IN the midst of plugging away at the OryCon preparations, I find myself compelled to take an hour off and sit with my elderly cat, Hrothgar. I don't need to cosset him or pet him, just an occasional stroke and a word or two in his ear.

Since I'm sitting here anyway, I think I'll do the final read-through on Chapter Eleven of SALTARAE. If I like it as is, I'll post it tonight. Whoo-hoo.

SADLY...

Oct. 12th, 2013 10:26 pm
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SADLY…

My ability to keep up with the ‘Weekly Chapter’ of SALTARAE has come to a temporary end. I am beat, frankly, and it feels to me like the Craft Level of the writing is starting to fall. SO: I am taking a hiatus. (See the entry titled "Ambition, Part Two, September 12, for an excuse.) Sorry to leave you all with such a cliffhanger, and I will try to post Chapter Eleven shortly after Orycon, maybe that weekend. Chapter Twelve will appear the Sunday after Thanksgiving, and my goal is to then continue with Weekly Chapters, until the story reaches a true climax.

THEN, it will become a book, (with the smut added back in) and the next adventure will begin sometime thereafter…if there is any sign that people desire it, and IF Mr Rothakis continues to talk to me.

"Medusa, a Tale of Vengeance"? Yeah, that's gotta get finished, too.

Also, I need to do some research for panels at Orycon, and if essays arise out of that, I will post them here for your enjoyment.

BTW, there has been a small edit to Chapter Ten, a rather miniscule paragraph or two inserted. Very near the end.

Gotta go…see ya.
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Hello, everyone. Yes, I have been distracted by the ‘real’ world, and haven’t been keeping up with all of you. Here’s the skinny: Between Egil’s and the end of the Country Fair cleanup, I have been extremely busy in the material world. My writing has suffered, although the ideas kept coming (and they are all noted in various notebooks or typed into the various documents, awaiting action).
Fortunately, I had gotten a lot done on several projects in the run-up to those events, and SALTARAE, the soon-to-be serialized story set (in part) at the Oregon Country Fair, is in good shape. The first two chapters are fairly polished up, and a beta reader is looking them over. I am on track to begin the serialization on time, first Sunday in August.
Gonna have to get to work, though. I’d like an edited draft of at least two more chapters ready before the start date. And at some point I have to be far enough ahead of that to go ahead with MEDUSA: that book is starting to weigh on my mind. It wants finished. Eleni is getting impatient.
Ah, yes: then there’s the day job. I need to get going, the mowing jobs are calling me, too. I’ll set a goal to keep you all more informed, and meet that with at least bi-weekly posts.
See ya.
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A Tale that begins with a Trip to the Oregon Country Fair, and ends...
who knows where?

SALTARAE: An Adventure Across Timelines.

A story (of unknown length) by A.M. Brosius

To be serialized on LiveJournal beginning the First Sunday in August!

Mr. Ambros Rothakis is going to the Country Fair. On the run from various enemies, he hopes to disappear into the Fair for a few days. When he stumbles across the unbelievable, and disappears from the Fair, mayhem and madness ensue. Join him on his adventures in Alternate Histories: even in the Commonwealth Timeline!

Find it here!
CHAPTER ONE: Are You Going to the Oregon Country Fair? will appear on Sunday, 4 August.
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So, been a while since (once again) since I shared the writer's life with you folks. Some of you may know that my latest project is a science fiction 'alternate Timelines' story, featuring a guy very much like myself (Not my fault. He appeared and demanded that his story be told.) He looks like me, acts a lot like me, and his opinions are a lot like mine. That said, his is an alternate Timeline, and he is NOT entirely me. He is more OCD; he is more of a badass anarchist-syndicalist than I; he started swordplay at a younger age, and hence is better at that than I am; he's had more experience with real bad guys than I have, and is hence way nastier when crossed.
Other differences will become manifest as the story proceeds. In this excerpt, he learns a little about the multiverse he has lived in all his life, without knowing it, and about the tech available to him in the *real world*.
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Here is an excerpt from a story I am working on. A short set-up: 'Mr Rothakis' is a character whose appearance, opinions, (and often) actions are remarkably similar to my own. He is from alternate Timeline, a lot like ours but with some key differences.
He has run afoul of some people from yet another Timeline, one that is the continuation of the Commonwealth Timeline that some of you are familiar with from my other novels. (LEONTARI; and: VIASMAE)
They have recruited him, and he is now their agent in his own TL. When he is in the Commonwealth TL, he is very low-Status: a barbarian, old and ignorant, though learning fast.
OTOH, back in his own TL, he knows more, and has more confidence, than most people around him. Hence the following:


Someone was knocking on the door. Pounding, actually. Long rolls of light banging interspersed with short bursts of hard hammering.

“Wake, up, Kim.”

“Whah? Whoozat?”

“It has to be a cop, no one else does that trick to wake people up. I hope it’s just Deputy Dan, the guy I met at the Fair. Get up and dress, if you want to. I’ll deal with him.” He turned to the door and shouted: “OKAY! Give me a minute, huh?” The pounding subsided.

He shook out his tangled hair, looked around. He found his pants, grabbed some shorts, then went to the bathroom and washed up a bit. He forced a comb through his hair and tied it up. When he was dressed he walked to the door. Kim was sitting on the edge of the bed, still naked, looking disturbed and resentful. “I’ll bring breakfast back, okay?”

“Yeah, okay.” She was not a morning person, that was obvious. He shrugged and grimaced. She shook her head and lay back down.

He stopped by the door and took a couple deep breaths, composing himself. He pulled out his wallet and checked for his key card, and made sure he had a twenty in the money compartment. Then he went over his recently re-written ‘cop-encounter checklist’ and smiled. He opened the door a crack and said, pleasantly: “I have a guest in here and she’s not dressed for a visitor. Let’s go across to the coffee shop and I’ll buy you a scone.”

“Good enough,” said the deputy. It was Dan all right. He had a laptop under his left arm and a sarcastic smile on his face. Ambros buried his resentment for the moment, thinking: ‘I’ll need to adjust his attitude right quick.’ It was amazing how the Shifter in his pocket increased his cool around this cop. The Shifter and the backing it represented: a Timeline full of badass anarcho-militants, who were now his friends. He slipped out the door, closing it behind him.

When they were seated, with coffee and tea and bits of food in front of them, the cop made as if to speak. Ambros held up a hand, obtained silence, then said: “I don’t like being gamed. I never have. The business of pounding a subject awake in the hope of discomforting him and extracting information? That’s you, gaming me.” He was looking the man directly in the eye, and letting a little of his anger show: “If you think I have info that you want, ask for it. Email me and I’ll meet you. If you bang on my door like that again, you can forget about a cooperative attitude from me.” He smiled then: “I read the RCMP Interrogation Manual when it was posted online, and a lot of the commentary on it from cops and from bad guys. So, no games, okay? You respect me, I respect you, as one person to another.”

He could see the deputy struggling with the implications. Dan glared at him, then slowly his expression softened. “Okay,” he said, reluctantly. “I see your point. I’ll do my best.”

“I hope so. I realize that ten years ago, before all the budget cutting BS that’s been going down, you probably would have just run me in for sassing you like that.”

“Maybe.”

Ambros looked at the deputy’s ID tag: “So, Deputy Samuelson, what can I do for you?”

“Mr. Rothakis...may I call you Ambros?”

“No.”

“Um...”

“The day may come when it’s Ambros and Dan. It ain’t here yet. What can I do for you?”

The deputy lifted the computer off his lap, and set it on the table. He said: “Well, then, Mr. Rothakis, I want you to look at a surveillance video, and tell me what you think. Mr. Clotarde—we got a name out of him, but we have no way to confirm it—he is still a mystery to us. A bigger mystery than ever, actually.”

“Have you checked with la Migra? They might know something about him. Surely they’d want to ask him a few questions.” Ambros kept his poker face in place, giving nothing away.

“Yeah, we called ’em. They asked us to keep him, but it was gonna be a week before they could send a guy down from Portland. Anyway, there’s this system, we only have so many jail beds...”

“You mean you’re short of deputies and guards, of course. The beds are there, you just can’t use them. And I read in the paper about the Matrix. So he got ‘matrixed out’ did he?”

“Yeah,” Samuelson said, sourly. “He was out the door for ten minutes when the Sheriff called me in and showed me this video. Here, press play.”

Ambros did as he was asked, and watched a grainy video of a dozen men and a couple women filing out of the County Jail. As they dispersed into the street, one man stopped. It was Frenchie, for sure. He opened the plastic bag that held his belongings, pulled out his ‘Passport’ and activated it. He vanished. There must have been an audible pop from the air rushing in, since several of the released prisoners and other passersby turned to look. Then everyone went about their various affairs; it seemed that no one had actually seen the man vanish. But the camera had...

“If this isn’t just ‘shopped, then that’s a remarkable thing.” Ambros was grinning inside, and wondering how to handle this. He wasn’t going to lie, not directly, but there was no way to tell the truth and not seem like a nutball.

“I wondered about that myself,” said Samuelson. “But like I said, I saw this video ten minutes after it was recorded. Sheriff Burr is not that hot when it comes to tech stuff, he couldn’t have faked this.”

“I didn’t really think it was faked.”

The deputy rolled his eyes. “Then why did you bring that up?”

“I was stalling for time, trying figure out how much to say.”

“Oh.”

Ambros grinned: “Most people would never admit that, huh?”

“Not like that. How ’bout you just spill all you know and let me decide what’s relevant?”

“Hmmm...that would get you out of my hair. You’d decide that I was insane and not a good source of information, and you’d let me alone for a while.” Ambros paused then shook his head: “That’s just another way to lie to you, though. The facts here are not secret, they’re just hard to believe. How about this: I’ll tell you three things now. You won’t believe me. Then, when or if you find evidence or see stuff that convinces you that those three things are true, I’ll tell you something else.”

“I ought to take you down to the Jail and let you sit for a day.”

Ambros let the silence grow for a while, until Dan showed signs of discomfort. Then he said: “You guys have enough money troubles without a suit for false arrest. You’d lose that lawsuit. Because you have nothing on me. Because I am innocent of all wrongdoing, save that I am an anarchist and have no respect for authority. That, however, is not a crime.” He laughed out loud, then, saying: “So how about my offer? Deal?”

The deputy looked sour again, then smiled sarcastically and said: “Three things I won’t believe? But they’ll be true things? Yeah, right...fire away. Hit me with your best shot.”

“Okay. One: the tape is not ’shopped nor is there anything wrong with the machine. Mr. Clotarde--I should say Private Clotarde-- is no longer in Eugene, at least not this Eugene. It is possible that he will return here, but unlikely.”

“He really did just vanish? Bullshit.”

“I told you that you wouldn’t believe me.”

“Right...next?”

“Whether he returns or not, I expect you will encounter others of his sort. They will come and go as he did, by means of their ‘passports’, like that black cylindrical object that looked so odd under your x-ray machine.”

“How did you know that we x-rayed his stuff?”

“I guessed. Finally, Private C. belongs to a military group, an army. The little I know about them at this time suggests that they have zero respect for the sanctity of human life, except of course for their own. I expect that we are going to be dealing with them, and the intelligence agency that is associated with their government, in larger numbers as time goes on. That’s the third true thing.

“Now here’s some advice, Absolutely Free: Don’t underestimate them, or cut them any slack at all. And wear your body armor when you are dealing with ’em.”

“Huh.”

Ambros slurped the last of his tea, took the bag with Kim’s breakfast in it, and excused himself: “I expect that Kim is awake by now, and she’ll like her breakfast. And I have work to do beginning at noon. So, remember: email me and wait till I answer. Sometimes I’m a little slow.”

“Email you and wait. Got it. And Mr. Rothakis?”

“Yeah?”

“You were right. Ten years ago I would have arrested you.”

“Yes. I know.” Ambros grinned and left the cop glaring at his third cup of coffee.
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One of the ‘minor’ characters in my latest project has me wondering: when you see (or interact with) a ‘party girl’ (boy?), do you automatically assume that she (he) is less than you?
This is what I’ve noticed:
She has a drug of choice, which she enjoys a lot. Sometimes (often?) she overindulges.
She is more emotional than intellectual: feeling, laughing, crying, pouting. It’s all ‘on her sleeve’ and in your face.
She is sexually aggressive: she knows what she likes and by her mid-20s she will take emotional risks in order to get it.
If she has a ‘real job’ (most of her cohort do), it is not her real life. She works for that party: then she can stay up late, use her favorite drug(s), persevere until she obtains the sexual (sensual?), and emotional gratification that she really desires, or until she knows that such gratification is out of her reach for the night. Then she will sleep in, and do it all again.
Is she a lesser person than me? Than you? Why?
As I struggle to understand the world and write about it, looking in the odd corners of history for moments of clarity, I wonder: “Why Bother?” If, as I fear, there really is no hope for the human species, & we really are going to extinct ourselves, then how is my ‘struggle to comprehend’ any more than an indulgence? If it is something I am doing because the process attracts me, how is that different from her desire to party?
AND suppose she actually once said to herself: “This is ridiculous. The system is rigged. We’re killing the planet and ourselves. Nobody is listening to me. I’m gonna get high, and get laid, and sleep in. Screw the rest of it.” Is that analysis less sophisticated than mine? Or yours?
OR is it just more elegant? “Efficient,” says hrothgar1.
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So, another (preposterously) productive day slaving over a hot keyboard. Just short of 5000 words, according to the word of Word. More important, MEDUSA’s leading edge is now at page 204....SALTARAE is less than 60 pages total, so I wouldn’t say it has a leading edge. The other cool thing about this is, that the split was about even between the two projects: about 2500 into each, which is 5.3 pages into Medusa and 6 pages into Saltarae. I HAVE NO IDEA why this is going so well right now, and I refuse to analyze the whys and wherefores. It’s workin’, I ain’t gonna fix it.
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Tonight at Sam Bond's I wound up in a long conversation with a woman who is part of Community Village at the Country Fair. She tried to get several different people to advise her about internal politics in the Village. Every one else was like: "back away from the politics". How weird is it that after listening to her for 45 minutes and making some (rejected for good reasons) suggestions, I suddenly saw through the situation clearly? The whole argument is not about consensus, but about who is the executive. Apparently committees and councils have been taking decisions that could and should have gone to the assembly. I was able to apply anarchist theory and use historical examples and blah blah blah. Maybe she can use that to become more effective in advocating for her positions.

Moreover, since I am now writing a story that takes place at least in part at the Fair, I have a potentially interesting conversation to put into Mr. Rothakis' experience. Woo hoo.
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I don't think I want to go too deeply into it, yet, but this has been one of the most productive weeks in my relatively short writing 'career'. In three days I got more than 15 pages drafted. More important, plots advanced on both projects, and significant insights into the characters. This is good.

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