MEDUSA: A Tale of Vengeance

Today I worked on ‘Medusa’. No new stuff, but I (somewhat successfully) melded two chapters into one. Two conversations, on the same topics, shuffled together: all the points made, all the exposition retained, all the explication of character kept in. And I think it has a better feel for how deeply angry Eleni is about the Serbian violation(s) of the Truce. I would like to reach deeper into her soul on that score. Perhaps in the next revision of this chapter, I can find the words she was saying, words that have eluded me as yet. What would she say? What would she do?